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Query Class

March 10, 2011 by becca

So writers know that the most intimidating part of the writing process is not the novel, it’s the query letter.

(Do writers know that? Or am I the only one scared of a 4-paragraph letter?)

Anyway. I’m teaching Query Class to Mrs. G’s 8th grade honors lit classes today. And we’re making a great project. Want to hear all about it? Here it is. I taught them what a query is for, and how it’s written (leaning heavily on the AgentQuery website‘s fine advice). I talked about the “When…” formula for the hook, that goes “When (Main character) experiences (major inciting action) he must (crucial decision).” We talked about distilling a book to a paragraph synopsis (much, much easier to teach than to do). We talked about bios (and I read them a few, some from major award-winners, others from non-published first-timers), and about the all-important closing part, where you say “thanks for your time, and see how I’m really polite and professional?”

The project, then, is a book report. The kids will write to “an agent” and query the novel they’ve just read. They’ll find a killer hook. They’ll write a short synopsis. They’ll write the bio of the author, and request agency representation. Cute, right?

I love eighth grade.

(From the other side.)

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(8) Comments for this blog

  1. March 10, 2011

    How awesome are you? Love it!

    I wrote the first draft of my first query letter yesterday (I’m taking Elana’s workshop at LDSS) and it was nerve wracking at first, but ultimately inspiring. And then I researched synopses and nearly passed out from the anxiety of it all.

    Oh yes. I’d rather just write another book any day.

  2. March 10, 2011

    How awesome are you? Love it!

    I wrote the first draft of my first query letter yesterday (I’m taking Elana’s workshop at LDSS) and it was nerve wracking at first, but ultimately inspiring. And then I researched synopses and nearly passed out from the anxiety of it all.

    Oh yes. I’d rather just write another book any day.

  3. Melanie Jacobson
    March 10, 2011

    I taught 8th grade English. I loved it and miss it. That would have been a fantastic book report.

  4. Melanie Jacobson
    March 10, 2011

    I taught 8th grade English. I loved it and miss it. That would have been a fantastic book report.

  5. March 10, 2011

    I want to take your class. I’m not even kidding; I learned more about how to structure a query letter in this little post than I did in a 2 hour workshop last year.

    You are the bomb.

  6. March 10, 2011

    I want to take your class. I’m not even kidding; I learned more about how to structure a query letter in this little post than I did in a 2 hour workshop last year.

    You are the bomb.

  7. March 12, 2011

    What a great exercise and great way to involve a qualified parent. Hope it went well!

  8. March 12, 2011

    What a great exercise and great way to involve a qualified parent. Hope it went well!

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